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IMO, this article isn't GA quality anymore. It only has ten references, and there are several paragraphs and sentences that still need them. The references we do have aren't formatted properly. In addition, some of the sections could do with a little more length. I had pointed this out some time ago, but my concerns were not addressed. If it's not fixed in a week, I am proposing its demotion. '''<font face="Verdana">[[User:Purplebackpack89#top|<font color="#3A003A">Pur</font><font color="#800080">ple</font>]][[User talk:Purplebackpack89|<font color="#991C99">back</font><font color="#CC33CC">pack</font><font color="gold">89</font>]]</font>''' 03:07, 8 November 2010 (UTC)
IMO, this article isn't GA quality anymore. It only has ten references, and there are several paragraphs and sentences that still need them. The references we do have aren't formatted properly. In addition, some of the sections could do with a little more length. I had pointed this out some time ago, but my concerns were not addressed. If it's not fixed in a week, I am proposing its demotion. '''<font face="Verdana">[[User:Purplebackpack89#top|<font color="#3A003A">Pur</font><font color="#800080">ple</font>]][[User talk:Purplebackpack89|<font color="#991C99">back</font><font color="#CC33CC">pack</font><font color="gold">89</font>]]</font>''' 03:07, 8 November 2010 (UTC)

:"It only has ten references" - That isn't that much of an issue, the article isn't that long, so the number of references seems to be ok for me.
:Please be specific which things still need a reference and please remember that there is no need to put a reference for every single sentence. Sometimes, there is no need for a reference.
:I agree, the references look a bit weird, I think they got spoiled when some code was changed. I'll try to fix this.
:Can you point me to somewhere where you pointed out this before. Just out of curiosity, not that it matters much.
:Thanks, -[[User:Barras|Barras]] ([[User talk:Barras|talk]]) 09:27, 8 November 2010 (UTC)

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ummm

"During the first school years, von Braun attended a French secondary school in Berlin" ... he was only 8? Victuallers (talk) 10:25, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, this is true. In this time, there wasn't really a difference between secondary and primary school. He was teached at a secondary school "Die ersten Schuljahre verbrachte Wernher von Braun auf dem französischen Gymnasium in Berlin" (from ref #5) - The first schoolyears, WvB attended a French Grammar school/secondary school in Berlin. It looks ok for me, at least for the time we talking about. Barras (talk) 15:31, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Not up to GA anymore

IMO, this article isn't GA quality anymore. It only has ten references, and there are several paragraphs and sentences that still need them. The references we do have aren't formatted properly. In addition, some of the sections could do with a little more length. I had pointed this out some time ago, but my concerns were not addressed. If it's not fixed in a week, I am proposing its demotion. Purplebackpack89 03:07, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

"It only has ten references" - That isn't that much of an issue, the article isn't that long, so the number of references seems to be ok for me.
Please be specific which things still need a reference and please remember that there is no need to put a reference for every single sentence. Sometimes, there is no need for a reference.
I agree, the references look a bit weird, I think they got spoiled when some code was changed. I'll try to fix this.
Can you point me to somewhere where you pointed out this before. Just out of curiosity, not that it matters much.
Thanks, -Barras (talk) 09:27, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]