Talk:Automobiles of the 1920s

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"Rubbish suspension"?[change source]

Sounds a bit harsh wouldn't ya;; agree? (talk) 14:07, 13 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]


Good Cars for 1920's

Something has quite clearly gone wrong with this article[change source]

I do not possess enough knowledge on the subject to change this article, but it has a ridiculously juvenile and personal tone. It is also a stub, and appears to have been littered with passages from the book of Genesis.

UPDATE: I have edited the article to the best of my ability, attempting to neutralise the tone and remove unnecessary links. It would be good if this article could be expanded slightly.

Hi! Thanks for spotting this. It was just a bit of vandalism that got missed, unfortunately. I restored the original text as it was before the vandalism, and left your new work in the second paragraph. Feel free to continue editing it, I just didn't want to lose anyone's good work. :) Osiris (talk) 18:07, 17 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Hi. I've edited the wording slightly in the first paragraph (e.g. "a lot" to "considerably"), but it needs further edits or a complete re-write in order to sound less like a student.