Talk:Avril Lavigne

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This article used to be a good article. It was promoted on 13 January 2009 and demoted on 19 April 2011.
This means the community feels this article was written very well, but is not now.
You may see the vote that promoted the article here.
You may see the vote that demoted the article here.

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  1. The article must be about a subject which belongs in Wikipedia. There is no use improving articles that do not belong here, and better fit another wiki, like Wikibooks, Wikispecies, Wiktionary...
 Done. Avril Lavigne is a singer.
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 Done
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 Done
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 Done
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 Done
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I am going to try and get this up to GA status. --  Da Punk '95  talk  19:36, 25 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Problems[change source]

There are multiple issues I can see with this article. I went over it and wikified a host of terms which are not simple and corrected much of the language problems, but many remain. There are several cases of information being included in sections where it seems to have nothing to the rest of the section..

  • She was found in a bookstore while singing songs.
  • She started street performing.
  • She debuted when a recording artist saw her singing country songs in a book store.
    Was she lost in the bookstore? Was her first professional performance in the bookstore? On the street? These bits on her past are sketchy at best and a bit confusing.
  • Her most famous single currently is "Girlfriend".
    Isn't this more about her music career and not her life story?
  • Whibley asked Lavigne to marry him by surprising her with a trip to Venice, Italy. (was "Whibley proposed to Lavigne by..."
    Did he propose on the trip or drop to one need and say "here's a trip, lets get married"? How is surprising her a proposal?
  • Avril's younger sister Michelle Lavigne was one of Avril's bridesmaids. She likes the colours hot pink and black. The song "Iris" by the Goo Goo Dolls was played as their wedding song.
    What does her like of those colors have to do with the wedding?
  • In 1999, Avril won a competition to sing with Shania Twain in Ottawa, Canada.[6] She debuted when a recording artist saw her singing country songs in a book store.
    (debuted? see above) Which recording artist? The reference there give the name; it also says she was discovered at the age of 14. That would make it late '98 or early '99. If she performed in front of 20K people with Shania Twain but was discoved by "a recording artist in a book store", wouldn't the discovery have come before the competition?
  • She made her breakthrough with "Complicated", "Sk8er Boi" then "Don't Tell Me" and the first two singles off Let Go both entered the top 10 in the music charts.
    She made her breakthrough with three different songs? from two separate albums? Also, the entire sentence is a run-on. Breakthrough is one thought, hit singles is a different thought.
  • The next night, on Total Request Live, she gave the middle finger to journalists after being asked for her opinions of the media, later followed by other times where she was rude and violent.[9]
    The reference only supports that she was on TRL and gave the middle finger. There is no reference to her doing it to journalists (as if one could actualy find a journalist on MTV, let alone one at TRL) nor the other rudeness and violence that is implied to have taken place on the show (Later, followed by other times). Also, The next night - as the album was stated as released in May, would that be June 1? Including the date on the release would clear that up.
  • Lavigne and Matthew Gerard also wrote the song "Breakaway", which became a hit for Kelly Clarkson.
    Was this song that they wrote for another performer also on her album Under My Skin? If not, it does not need to be included in the subtopic of the album.
  • ..which is different to and saying "I want to" not "I wanna.
    ... *shrugs*
  • When her songs started getting too profane they stopped airing it completely sometimes, such as Radio Disney.
    Was it stopped completely or sometimes? and what is such as Radia Disney? The such as would probably go a lot better as Lavigne used to be a common favourite for public radio shows, such as Radio Disney.

That is a lot of problems for an article which is supposedly a good one. --Creol(talk) 05:42, 17 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Problems with article[change source]

  • "Avril Ramona Lavigne (born September 27, 1984) is a Canadian singer and songwriter." <-- I thought she was a fashion designer as well? Enwiki says she is a " Canadian singer-songwriter, fashion designer, actress, and philanthropist"
  • " She performed the track "Sponge Bob" for The SpongeBob SquarePants Movie" <-- Why is only this film mentioned?
  • " Avril has French-Canadian grandparents, however, Avril does not speak French." <-- Reference? Also, imo, it sounds like random trivia (the latter part)

 Fixed Fixed the three above. Albacore (talk · changes) 23:07, 10 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Overall, this article looks far away from being a GA in my opinion. A lot of work is required to make it better. For that matter, I haven't yet looked at the sources cited yet... Regards, Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 12:49, 26 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Many more examples of poptrash are in the article, such as

Even if the specifics were fixed, the whole article is lacking in real substance. She's notable enough, but this is just an average article, and should be demoted. Macdonald-ross (talk) 10:48, 8 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Forget GA. This article needs to worry about BLP Purplebackpack89≈≈≈≈ 17:26, 11 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Explain? The Rambling Man (talk) 07:37, 19 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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