Talk:Beauty of Loulan

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Copyediting[change source]

I did a copyedit of most of this article but because I can't find the source that mentions this Japanese person (it might be one of the non-English sources), I can't correct the language used to describe it. I'm afraid I can't tell what's happening in that sentence. Darkfrog24 (talk) 22:20, 16 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Grammatical and sentence quality changes[change source]

I've edited up to what is now "Mair claims a Chinese scientist later 'slipped in to their hands' as they were leaving". I've removed what I saw to be accusitory and not descriptive, and I've tried to make at least the first couple of paragrafs a little more grammatically correct - although there is still some more to fix. Hanaral24 (talk) 00:09, 18 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]