Talk:Boccia

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help please[change source]

The classification part? It involves highly technical language of sorts to describe types of disability. Can some one please help simplify this in a way that makes sense? (Other help to generally improve this stub also appreciated. The page on English Wikipedia is poorly sourced and not that useful. :() --LauraHale (talk) 04:58, 25 May 2013 (UTC)

Did you translate this automatically somehow? I assume "place for hearing law processes" was intended as a substitute for court (although obviously incorrectly in this case) and likewise with "send through air with force" for throw. I've had a go at rewriting it. Don't worry too much about vocabulary: if the word is too difficult, you can link it to Wiktionary; if it's ambiguous, that's where I usually try to replace it. But it's important to keep the language natural as well. You might need to check my work in case I've changed the meaning too much. Osiris (talk) 07:02, 26 May 2013 (UTC)