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Things to improve[change source]

  • Add "which originally contains caffeine" after "Cola is a type of carbonated drink"
  • Change "that was made from the kola nut in the past" to "and was made from kola nut in the past"
  • Add "Modern colas usually contain caramel color, caffeine and sweeteners as sugar or high-fructose corn syrup" to new paragraph

Some more things to improve...[change source]

  • Please sign your notes here with four tildes: ~~~~. Thank you. Macdonald-ross (talk) 17:14, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Please be careful in your use of language. The phrase "which originally contains caffeine" is quite ambiguous and unclear. Does it mean:
  1. It used to contain caffeine, but now it does not.
  2. The kola nut contains caffeine, and so does the drink...
  3. or what?

I think you are doing too many things on too many different pages! Maybe slow down a bit. Macdonald-ross (talk) 17:14, 14 April 2016 (UTC)