Talk:Cranial nerve

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Suggested Improvements[change source]

@Macdonald-ross:

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Suggesting a number of changes to the introduction to make it more clear. Currently it's a copy/paste from the regular english article, with missing details so it doesn't make much sense. I'm rewording the intro to make more sense to a 5th grade reader.

Also suggesting that there is a list of functions, like the main English article.

I think you undid ALL my changes. Let's have a discussion vs. completely reverting everything, yeah?

Please see the complete latest revision here:Cranial nerve, with edits

Thanks! Arjun.mehta.33 (talk) 15:31, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

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You changed "the brain (including the brainstem)" to "the brain or brainstem". This is an error, since the brainstem is part of the brain. You changed "the cranial nerves come out" to "All cranial nerves appear" which is obviously less clear.

Instead of "Cranial nerves relay information between the brain and parts of the body", you write "Cranial nerves relay information more directly between the brain and body". More directly than what?

I'm sorry, but I don't agree that your changes improved the page. Macdonald-ross (talk) 15:56, 5 June 2016 (UTC)