Talk:Cycloaddition

Example: Suggest Userfy until simple[change source]

Look at this one sentence. The problem is not just the chemistry, but the sentence structure.

"There are a few examples of thermal cycloadditions which have 4n π electrons (for example the [2 + 2] cycloaddition); these proceed in a suprafacial-antarafacial sense, such as the dimerisation of ketene, in which the orthogonal set of p orbitals allows the reaction to proceed via a crossed transition state."

Not even close. Gotanda (talk) 21:43, 21 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The above-quoted sentence has been broken down into 4 sentences now. Thanks, Racepacket (talk) 11:29, 22 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It was just one example. The revision doesn't help much. Still very complex. Much of the rest of the article has the same problems. This needs so much work that it should be userfied until simple. The reason to userfy this and many of the others is that I can't tutor you on each and every sentence of every one of these articles in real time. Gotanda (talk) 12:57, 22 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]