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This article has many issues. Please help fix them or discuss these issues on the talk page. This article may be confusing or unclear to readers. (May 2018) This article needs copy editing for grammar, style, cohesion, tone or spelling. (May 2018) This article needs more sources for reliability. (May 2018)
Do you find the article confusing? I don't. What should be improved? Let's address the criticisms above.