Talk:Lai Khutsangbi
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Simplifying[change source]
@Haoreima: I am trying to simplify this article. When it says "her look is very terrible," does that mean "her appearance is very frightening; she looks scary" or does it mean "her gaze is very terrible; when she looks directly at a person, that person becomes frightened"? Darkfrog24 (talk) 13:36, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
- Darkfrog24 I think either of the meaning is applicable since it's literature. I suppose this creature to be like Medusa of Greek mythology. Haoreima (talk) 13:51, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
- My readability gizmos say it is already in relatively simple English as well! Darkfrog24 (talk) 15:22, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
- Darkfrog24 What about the another sister, Yenakha Paodabi? Is the article in simple English? Haoreima (talk) 15:46, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
- Here is the checker that I use: [1] There is no single number rule for the Simple English Wikipedia or for this contest. I merely use it to help. Darkfrog24 (talk) 15:51, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
- Darkfrog24 What about the another sister, Yenakha Paodabi? Is the article in simple English? Haoreima (talk) 15:46, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
- My readability gizmos say it is already in relatively simple English as well! Darkfrog24 (talk) 15:22, 16 September 2021 (UTC)