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Plain, clear language rewrite badly needed[change source]

If the purpose of this simple Wikipedia is to present themes in an approachable way, then this article about lymphocytes has failed.

Wikipedia proper is notorious for the opaqueness and difficulty of some of its biology articles which seem to have been written by well-informed experts steeped in their complex, detailed disciplines but who, regrettably, are not gifted communicators for the plain needs of the general public who constitute the bulk of those who consult Wikipedia for insight.

This article needs to be entirely rewritten by someone competent in the subject at hand, in clear writing which is pitched at a proper level for this simple encyclopedia. 2009/05/27 19:00 UTC Odea (talk)