Talk:Mikhail Bulgakov

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The Master and Margarita[change source]

This section is quite complex, and contains a few tricky weasel words: An example,

With a fascinating cast of characters, the novel in its deepest layer is about the interplay of good and evil, innocence and guilt, courage and cowardice.

Fascination alludes to the editor's opinion, so needs to be either attributed or removed. The second clause is going to be difficult for our readers to understand. It also appears in the book's article. Even going on readability scores, the average grade level goes up from 8.7 in the first section to 10 in this section. There are a few complex-compound sentences that could be split up at least. Osiris (talk) 08:33, 28 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Well, I agree with all this. Macdonald-ross (talk) 11:01, 28 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]