Talk:Mitt Romney

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This is SEWP, and we should avoid complex words, where possible. That way I have reworded the 'presumptive candidate' into him probably being candidate for .... I have also removed his religious affiliation (Mormonism). While I see that adhering to some faith is probably important in US presidential elections, Romney is first and foremost a businessman. If anyone wants to get religious beliefs back in, do so in a section about his private life / family. It feels out of place to talk about religion in the intro (a few sentences) of a stub on an US businessman who may be one of the runners in the presidential election this year. --Eptalon (talk) 19:23, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

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Poorly written across the board.