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This page still looks a little complex when I take a look at it. Does anyone else here agree with this? -Razorflame (contributions) Talk 23:04, 4 December 2007 (UTC)

No. What do you think needs changing? If you don't want to change it yourself I will take a closer look tomorrow and also flesh out some of the redlinks -- Barliner  talk  23:10, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
To me, it just looks like the page is still a bit too complex. But if you don't agree with this, then I will drop this. -Razorflame (contributions) Talk 23:11, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
There are multiple terms on the page that need work. Many are fairly common and just need linking (River, jew (linked 4 paragraphs after first use), Holy Roman Empire (same problem as jews), industry, actually the entire economy section, etc). Others may need entirely reworded (concessions, prosecute, bankrupt, dissolved). Also, the US Air Force (USAF) did not take part in the Jan 2, 1945 bombings - it was not created until 1947. The US Army Air Forces (USAAF) worked with the RAF on that bombing. -- Creol(talk) 23:32, 4 December 2007 (UTC)