Talk:Pediatric acute-onset neuropsychiatric syndrome

This article contains a translation of Pediatric acute-onset neuropsychiatric syndrome (PANS) from en.wikipedia.

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Please no deletion. It is planned to change and simplify the article within the next 72 hours to fit better to the Simple English Wiki idea. Thank you.

The article is largely based on the English Wikipedia version which is is not what Simple Wikipedia is about. Maybe take this to your sandbox and fix it up there? Remember we are here to help. Best, Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:31, 25 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Major simplification has already begun. Have a look. Thank you.

--Andreas Parker (talk) 23:44, 25 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The lead is still too complex. This word list of simple words can help you identify simple words. So, if you are using a complex word it will not be on the list. Instead, find a simpler word to replace it. Example: "Her dress is equivalent to the queen's dress" ----> "Her dress is similar to the queen's dress." Hope this helps, Jona ^{talk to me} 23:48, 25 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I can move the article to User:Andreas Parker/PANS if you like; there, it is in your userspace and you can work on it without fear of it being deleted. You can then move it back into the article space when it has been simplified. Let me know if you'd like that. -Mh7kJ (talk) 23:51, 25 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It's such a short article. I try to change it right now. Give me 30 min. Thanks.

--Andreas Parker (talk) 23:53, 25 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It's been rapidly simplified - now an simple article in its own right. Better? ;-) --Andreas Parker (talk) 00:10, 26 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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You do not need "then it is called" which is orish. The section "Signs and symptoms" needs further simplification and you need to link terms like anxiety. Best, Jona ^{talk to me} 00:40, 26 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It's fine for a first try. It looks like Andreas is commited to it, so that's good. Tagged it for some additional, collaborative simplification. Osiris (talk) 03:37, 26 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I've continued making the article more simple. To me it seems to be very simple now --Andreas Parker (talk) 12:12, 27 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The article is now as simple as possible. Rgds, --Andreas Parker (talk) 08:19, 10 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]