Talk:Pizza

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Umm...[change source]

I was looking up pizza because I couldn't remember what part of Italy it originated from, and ended up getting distracted when I saw the little "simple English" thing (it's not like pizza is a complicated subject). But anyways, curiosity struck me so I clicked on it and got to reading... There are parts of this that were not written well. Some of the sentences sound redundant and/or awkward. Simple writing doesn't have to be bad writing. Nor does every little thing have to be broken down because it actually makes the writing harder to follow. Some of this was like reading something a little kid wrote; it's not like you can't follow it but sometimes you have to think about what the kid is trying to say because of the poor wording. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.16.193.92 (talk) 04:58, 8 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]