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I tried to make the article simpler. Please tell me if it is better or worse. Thank you. -- 21:22, 1 Jun 2005 (UTC)

I think it looks simplified and can have the tag removed. I tried to improve a couple of sentences with odd structure. I also think this one:
The country says that Olivença is also part of it, but it is controlled by Spain.
could use work just because of the antecdents. Perhaps even allow some repetition?:
Portugal believes that Olivença is part of Portugal, but Spain controls Olivença.
(Also, should we add the Spanish name? Probably Olivenza -- no ç in Spanish!) I'll remove the {{unsimple}} tag if no one advocates for it remaining in a few days. -- PhilipR 18:38, 13 Jun 2005 (UTC)