Talk:Principality of the Pindus

New page imported and being simplified[change source]

See en:Talk:Principality of the Pindus and lad:Talk:Principality of the Pindus. I just imported the short article draft @FocalPoint left me on the Ladino page and adapted it. I have not yet finished simplifying. I ask a week before anyone starts complaining. Thank you. StevenJ81 (talk) 14:12, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi StevenJ81. This is excellent. I will make some changes, to make it more neutral. Please check what I do and modify it to fit the local policy. --FocalPoint (talk) 19:42, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Will be watching ... StevenJ81 (talk) 19:45, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

StevenJ81, I changed the text. Now it is your turn! --FocalPoint (talk) 20:47, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@FocalPoint: Back at you. So aside from vocabulary issues, we try to minimize the use of sentences with subordinate clauses. Hence "among which were" >> "including". Hard to eliminate them entirely. But simplifying syntax is also important on this wiki. StevenJ81 (talk) 13:40, 17 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Links[change source]

Just a few ideas for links:

Certainly part of Aromanian history in Greece
Samarina, the main village of the events of 1917
If there is an article of events in the Balkans during the 1st WW.
Occupation of Greece 1941-44 (but main link would be the Roman Legion. The Legion existed as a paramilitary entity, while the «Principality» was only an idea, not even on paper, just on discussions.

--FocalPoint (talk) 20:55, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]