Talk:Principality of the Pindus

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New page imported and being simplified[change source]

See en:Talk:Principality of the Pindus and lad:Talk:Principality of the Pindus. I just imported the short article draft @FocalPoint left me on the Ladino page and adapted it. I have not yet finished simplifying. I ask a week before anyone starts complaining. Thank you. StevenJ81 (talk) 14:12, 12 August 2015 (UTC)

Hi StevenJ81. This is excellent. I will make some changes, to make it more neutral. Please check what I do and modify it to fit the local policy. --FocalPoint (talk) 19:42, 16 August 2015 (UTC)

Will be watching ... StevenJ81 (talk) 19:45, 16 August 2015 (UTC)

StevenJ81, I changed the text. Now it is your turn! --FocalPoint (talk) 20:47, 16 August 2015 (UTC)

@FocalPoint: Back at you. So aside from vocabulary issues, we try to minimize the use of sentences with subordinate clauses. Hence "among which were" >> "including". Hard to eliminate them entirely. But simplifying syntax is also important on this wiki. StevenJ81 (talk) 13:40, 17 August 2015 (UTC)

Links[change source]

Just a few ideas for links:

  • Certainly part of Aromanian history in Greece
  • Samarina, the main village of the events of 1917
  • If there is an article of events in the Balkans during the 1st WW.
  • Occupation of Greece 1941-44 (but main link would be the Roman Legion. The Legion existed as a paramilitary entity, while the «Principality» was only an idea, not even on paper, just on discussions.

--FocalPoint (talk) 20:55, 16 August 2015 (UTC)