Talk:Riboflavin

Not simple enough[change source]

Hi there,

I thought I made the article quite a bit simpler than the one at the English Wikipedia. What parts are still too hard? --Slashme 14:14, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I think it is the use of "gut" it should e replaced with stomach, I had difficulty at first reading it with gut, it seems weird oh and the repeted use of "one" Phantomx129 (talk) 17:09, 16 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The content is definitely simplified, but it's not written with easy to understand grammar and style.

Second person[change source]

I have started taking out second person text. --Slashme 16:21, 3 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]