Talk:Shooting of Trayvon Martin

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Some of the language in this could use some simplifying. There are contractions, and a lot of complex-compound sentences. Take the first two sentences, for example: the first contains three clauses, and the second contains four or five! Osiris (talk) 05:22, 1 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Had a bit of a go at simplifying. Osiris (talk) 06:13, 3 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]