Talk:Sonic the Hedgehog

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Suggestions for improvement[change source]

I just recently got an account, so be easy on me. I also know that this isn't a very good title, but I'm not sure what other title I should use. Anyway, this article could use some improvement. First off, we could be more specific about how fast Sonic can run. Instead of "He is a young blue hedgehog who can run fast", we could use "He is a young blue hedgehog who can run at the speed of light." Second, the info about the other characters. Tails can fly with his tails, that's right. But we should also mention his skills at machinery. That's an important aspect of the character. And the sentence "He also takes care of the Master Emerald in his hometown," in the Knuckles section. The article doesn't explain what the Master Emerald is. And Amy Rose is in love in Sonic, correct. But Sonic seems to not want to get married with her. We should mention that in the article. Also, the Cream section has the sentence "She also has a friend, a baby chao named Cheese." The article doesn't explain what a chao is, either. And "She also has a friend" makes it sound like Cheese is the only friend she has. Poor Cream, she must be so lonely. The other characters should also be mentioned. Shadow the hedgehog, for example. He is a very popular and notable character. Thank you for taking the time to read this. EDIT: I got a new idea. Maybe we could add info about Sonic's personality and the other characters personalities, as long as we don't go into too much detail. We don't want the article to be too long do we? But I'm not sure about you guys. ANOTHER EDIT: I think that we should mention that Sonic came from Japan. Panda Bear 20:36, 7 May 2007 (UTC)

I found out that any toys of characters are eligible for copyright. Panda Bear 17:44, 30 May 2007 (UTC)

I uploaded a picture of a statue of Sonic. Panda Bear 01:37, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

Well, I would say that all of your edit suggestions are good. If you went about making the changes doing your best to keep it simple, when you are done you can let me know and I can go through and copyedit it for you to check for any mistakes. -  BrownE34  talk  contribs  19:02, 16 May 2007 ==(UTC)

Watch[change source]

I want to let you people know that I will be watching this page.~Tailsman67~ 98.71.49.244 (talk) 15:22, 17 May 2012 (UTC)

Style of writing[change source]

I am not certain whether the Simple English Wikipedia project has a different Manual of Style with regards to writing about fiction, but the English Wikipedia project's w:WP:MOSFICT page states that articles about fictional content should be written from a real-word perspective, not an "in-universe" perspective. This article is written primarily from an in-universe perspective. To make this article more encyclopedic, it would be better to rewrite this content from the perspective of the real-world. Include more real-world information such as the development of the character and the character's critical and popular reception. Balance the fictional descriptions with the real-world content. Mz7 (talk) 05:31, 6 July 2014 (UTC)