User talk:Thine Antique Pen
Hi! I'm TomTomN00! Leave a message below. :)
Solar System[change source]
Hey :D I see you have been editing space articles. Me and User:Orashmatash are currently working on this project. We are expanding it to be come a "very good article". Would you be interested in working with us? Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 13:14, 4 April 2012 (UTC)
- Sure! I'll put a copy in my userspace (User:Tomtomn00/Solar System) to have a few tests before putting them in your version. Thanks, ~ ⇒TomTomN00 @ 14:45, 4 April 2012 (UTC)
- You're welcome :) You can start off my simplifying the third paragraph of the lead from the enWP version. Thanks again, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 14:52, 4 April 2012 (UTC)
- I tried simplifying it. I put the basic things in. (See the bottom section. The section above that is the paragraph from en, with lines over what I didn't use. ~ ⇒TomTomN00 @ 15:04, 4 April 2012 (UTC)
- I have your userpage and your userproject on my watchlist so no need for a talk back :D All I see is a strike out of four sentences and below a somewhat simplified sentence. However, "there is something called a" isn't good English, it makes the language poor. Try keeping the prose and grammar very good. Simple English means English in a simpler form, not a form of bad grammar ;) But don't worry I'm here to help, so if you believe you are done, I'll go in and c/e the section to the best of my knowledge. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 15:09, 4 April 2012 (UTC)
- I tried simplifying it. I put the basic things in. (See the bottom section. The section above that is the paragraph from en, with lines over what I didn't use. ~ ⇒TomTomN00 @ 15:04, 4 April 2012 (UTC)
- You're welcome :) You can start off my simplifying the third paragraph of the lead from the enWP version. Thanks again, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 14:52, 4 April 2012 (UTC)
September 2012[change source]
We like and strongly encourage helpful changes to Wikipedia, but an article you created was directly copied and pasted from the main English Wikipedia. Please do not do that. Such articles are usually too complex and may have templates that do not exist here. Thank you. Please simplify them a little bit more 
@intforce 18:17, 19 September 2012 (UTC)
RfD nomination of Template:Extent[change source]
An editor has requested deletion of Template:Extent, an article you created. We appreciate your changes, but the nominator doesn't believe that the article meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion and has explained why in his/her nomination (see also "What Wikipedia is not").
Please comment on the discussion by adding your comments at Wikipedia:Requests for deletion/Requests/2013/Template:Extent and please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~).
You may also change the article during the discussion to address the nominator's concerns. But you should not remove the requests for deletion template from the top of the article; such removal will not end the deletion debate. Thank you very much. Osiris (talk) 10:17, 8 December 2013 (UTC)