Talk:Shiv Kumar Batalvi

Hello and thank you for contributing to the Feminism and Folklore Edit-a-Thon 2024! First, I will run the text of this article through my readability gizmo... It's giving an average of eighth grade. I will now read the article using my human brain.

There are a few places where the English doesn't make sense and I can't fix them. "He completed his matriculation in 1953..." is strange in English. To "matriculate" is to enter a school for the first time, but "complete" means to finish one's studies. I think you should rewrite phrases like this in simple English.

The statement that a poem is beautiful is not encyclopedic tone. Either leave it out or quote the source that says it's beautiful, but Wikipedia's voice should not speak opinions.

If this is a translation, then it has to be attributed per WP:TA. This is a longstanding policy here on SEWP. Darkfrog24 (talk) 22:10, 20 February 2024 (UTC)