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Stress incontinence[change | change source]

Sample one[change | change source]

original text from the journal:

"The pathology of SUI is multifactorial, with strong evidence pointing to bladder neck and urethral incompetence. While there is also evidence of impaired urethral support and levator ani function, standardized approaches to measurement are needed to generate higher levels of evidence."[1]

my edited version:

The cause of Stress Urinary Incontinence (SUI) can be due to many factors. Some of these are bladder neck defects and urethral defects. Other instances of SUI may be due to impaired support of the urethra and levator ani muscle.[1]

simple engiish version:

Stress Urinary Incontinence can be due to weak muscles of the bladder and urethra. Another cause could be a weak levator ani muscle.[1]

Sample two[change | change source]

original text from the journal:

"Incontinence may be a result of bladder dysfunction, sphincter dysfunction, or a combination of both, "[2]

my edited version:

Sphincter disfunction, bladder dysfunction or both may cause incontinence.[2]

simple engiish version:

Sphincter disfunction, bladder dysfunction or both of these may cause incontinence.[2]

references

  1. 1.0 1.1 1.2 Falah-Hassani, Kobra; Reeves, Joanna; Shiri, Rahman; Hickling, Duane; McLean, Linda (03/2021). "The pathophysiology of stress urinary incontinence: a systematic review and meta-analysis". International Urogynecology Journal. 32 (3): 501–552. doi:10.1007/s00192-020-04622-9. ISSN 1433-3023. PMC 8053188. PMID 33416968. {{cite journal}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)
  2. 2.0 2.1 2.2 Nitti, Victor W (2001). "The Prevalence of Urinary Incontinence". Reviews in Urology. 3 (Suppl 1): S2–S6. ISSN 1523-6161. PMC 1476070. PMID 16985992.