Talk:Marche mondiale des Femmes
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Greetings F&F 2024 participant. As usual, I will begin this preliminary evaluation by running the text through a readability gizmo. I am getting nothing younger than tenth grade with an average of eleventh.[1]
I will now read the text with my mighty human brain. I concur with the readability gizmo. In fact, I'd recommend moving this one out of mainspace and into draftspace for further work. Darkfrog24 (talk) 23:32, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
- How to move? -- 💌Ayesha46 (talk) 16:04, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Ayesha46 If you're using the default skin (Vector 2022) on a computer, there is a "move" link in the right-hand-side "tools" sidebar. If you're using it on a mobile device, you can find the "move" link by clicking on the "more" icon (three vertical dots). Kk.urban (talk) 16:12, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
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Hi Darkfrog24, I saw your edit summary (I don't know how to simplify this because I can't see the source
), and I'm curious which source you're referring to. I might be able to find it. Kk.urban (talk) 19:44, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- I can't see the source because it isn't there. There is no in-line citation in that section. Darkfrog24 (talk) 20:12, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- Ok, I got it! Kk.urban (talk) 20:16, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- He's asking about the section named "Current Status" -- 💌Ayesha46 (talk) 20:13, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, that's the one. No citation. By the way, my readability gizmo now gives the article as young as sixth grade with an average of eighth. Darkfrog24 (talk) 20:16, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Darkfrog24 why don't you participate in it as a Contestant? Just curious haha... -- 💌Ayesha46 (talk) 20:18, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- Ha ha. I don't feel like it. This year, I had a pretty big commitment IRL for all of March. If Haoreima hadn't stepped up to take first chair, Simple might not have participated this year.
- So, since you're here and you've already read all the sources, I think the article should say flat out something like "the march was a parade" or "the marchers walked from [this place] to [that place]." A first-time reader might not already know that we mean march in the sense of March on Washington or March for Peace. Darkfrog24 (talk) 20:20, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Darkfrog24 why don't you participate in it as a Contestant? Just curious haha... -- 💌Ayesha46 (talk) 20:18, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, that's the one. No citation. By the way, my readability gizmo now gives the article as young as sixth grade with an average of eighth. Darkfrog24 (talk) 20:16, 2 April 2024 (UTC)