User talk:16chseld 105/sandbox
Feedback on adding sentences[change source]
@16chseld 105: Re-read the sentences you added carefully. Make sure that they make sense and you don't have any extra words or verb tenses that aren't the same. Swim123blue (talk) 17:49, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
Heading phrase and placement of citation[change source]
@16chseld 105: Good work writing your first paragraph. Two things to keep in mind:
- When at all possible, keep the article title words out of the headings. These should be sub-categories of the main topic and not have the topic words in each heading, that would be repetitive
- place the citation at the end of a sentence, directly after a specific fact that can be verified from the source you're citing.
See me if you need any further help. Swim123blue (talk) 06:03, 18 May 2016 (UTC)