Talk:British Rail Class 117

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  • The infobox is incomplete.
  • British Rail - should be bold, because it's part of the title.
     Fixed Pmlineditor I ♥ Gobby! 08:00, 18 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • When it was first introduced, these three-car units were all based at the similar Class 121 single carriage (railcar) units on British Railway's Western Region for suburban work out of London Paddington. - very long sentence, therefore too complex.
     Fixed Broken up into two sentences. Pmlineditor I ♥ Gobby! 08:09, 18 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • It was also based... - The units were largely based... - The units... - poorly written.
  • soldiered - not simple.
  • liability - not simple.
  • branchline curves - not simple.
  • Lot'S of redlinks.
     Doing... 12 remain. Pmlineditor I ♥ Gobby! 12:29, 18 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Only two refs.

Barras (talk) 19:12, 17 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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