Talk:Layla and Majnun
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Greetings F&F 2024 participant! I have begun by running the text of this article through my readability gizmo. It is giving me readings no younger than eighth grade with an average of ninth.
I will now read the article using my brain.
"Be together" is an English idiom with many possible interpretations. "Was known" could be active voice. "Version," "obsession," could be simpler. Try to imagine you're planning a vocabulary lesson for ten year olds. What fancy words are in there?
Remember, we call these translations for a reason: You're allowed to use your judgement and translate. I guess what I'm saying is put more of you into this. Your perspective isn't merely allowed. It is what is wanted. Darkfrog24 (talk) 21:21, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
- I've simplified the wording and tried explaining the terms. Could you take another look and let me know if it's better now? – Cyber.Eyes2005Talk 12:35, 6 March 2024 (UTC)