Talk:Prakash Kaur

Hello and thank you for contributing to the F&F 2024 write-a-thon. I will begin by running the text of this article through my readability gizmo: [1] I'm getting nothing below ninth grade with an average of tenth. That usually means the English is not simple enough.

I will now read the article with my brain. Yes, I see several places where the English can and should be simpler. For example, it's not clear what "experience the music" would mean. Try saying things like "hear the music." Simple English is sometimes more specific than regular English.

If this article has been translated from any other wiki, it must be marked as such. Since we've discussed this already, I'll assume that either this is an original or you're planning to mark it as soon as you are able, in compliance with WP:TA. Darkfrog24 (talk) 19:24, 21 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @Darkfrog24 Thanks for the review/advice and yes, this is written as per my original research and I have just taken the Infobox from En Wiki -- 💌Ayesha46 (talk) 20:24, 21 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent. I'm going to assume that of all your other entries—that if it's a translation, it's already marked as one. Darkfrog24 (talk) 21:38, 21 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes

💌Ayesha46 (talk) 01:10, 22 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]