Talk:Super Smash Bros. (video game)

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Things to consider before I think it can be a GA[change source]

  • Crossover fighting game is red linked. It´s vital to understanding the article what these terms mean so I suggest you create the required pages.
  • "It was sold in Japan on January 21, 1999..." sold for just one day? Rephrase.
  • Apply that comment to the rest of the "sold in" phrases in the lead.
  • "people players" do you mean human players?
  • "...games and more!" is this an advert?!
  • Introduce the characters before listing them out.
  • "8 starters and 4 unlockables." this is unclear, grammatically incorrect, and numbers below 10 should be written as text.
  • "you will always fight last" this isn´t an instruction manual, rephrase.
  • Rephrase the rest of the sections with that in mind.
  • Avoid contractions, e.g. "they´re"... they are.
  • I would appreciate more references in the "How it works" section.
  • "The making of SSB" expand SSB as you´ve never used it before as an abbreviation.
  • "In Japan, 1.97 million Super Smash Bros. CDs were sold, and 2.93 million Super Smash Bros. CDs have been sold in the United States." needs referencing.

The Rambling Man on tour (talk) 21:19, 8 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]