Hello and thank you for contributing to the F&F 2024 write-a-thon and contest. I will begin by running this article through my readability gizmo. Some of the formulae rate this text as suitable for readers as young as eighth grade, but I don't like to see anything over eighth grade, and its average is ninth.[1]
I see a couple of places where passive voice could be converted to active "The dance is well known in Qatar" vs "People also perform the dance in Qatar."
