User talk:16chseld 108/sandbox

2 Stars and a real wish

• Good enough information for the topic - Star
• A lot of wikilinks related to the topic - Star
• You need to fix the grammar and spelling errors such as the definite articles - Wish 17chseld 105 (talk) 17:27, 30 May 2017 (UTC)

stars and wish

Your article is simple enough to read. And you have credible sources. You may want to correct your spelling errors to improve this page. -17chseld 107 (talk) 18:02, 30 May 2017 (UTC)

Two stars and a wish

Two stars

• Easy to understand.
• linked a lot of the special words.

A wish

• Can add some picture.17chseld 101 (talk) 15:52, 31 May 2017 (UTC)

suggestion

• Add more information about her later life

16chseld 108 (talk) 21:22, 29 May 2018 (UTC)