User talk:16chseld 114/sandbox
My Suggestions[change source]
- It's suggested to add photographer's name and description to the image.
- Cite the same source together.
- "King arthur" should be capitalized.
- Delete the last sentence of the first paragraph.
17chseld 107 (talk) 22:09, 28 May 2018 (UTC)
Changes to make[change source]
@16chseld 114: You need to cite your sources at the end of a paragraph, not in a little part at the end. See me if you need help on how to do this. Also, have someone read your article carefully to fix any mistakes. Swim123blue (talk) 17:09, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
More changes to make before your article is ready to launch[change source]
@16chseld 114: Please make these changes:
- your headings should be phrases, not questions. Change the 2 headings that are questions into phrases that describe what you will talk about
- one of your headings has an explanation in parentheses (__). You can take this out because the other words outside parentheses describe it enough.
Otherwise, pretty good! You worked through the steps very quickly. Please help others if you finish early. Swim123blue (talk) 04:13, 2 June 2016 (UTC)