User talk:17chseld 101/sandbox

two stars and one wish

• I think your paragraph is very good because you have some link to explain some difficult word.
• you have some references below your paragraph.

~* you can add some pictures to show your paragraph brtter.16chseld 110 (talk) 17:30, 30 May 2017 (UTC)

two stars and a wish

• very easy to understand
• your topic is choose very well

~*more link 17chseld 110 (talk) 16:26, 31 May 2017 (UTC)