User talk:20chseld304/Jiaozi

Good start. Shorter sentences.

I see that you solved the translation problem. Good work! Because you are writing for Simple English WP, you need to make the sentences shorter. Try to have just one, maybe two, verbs in each sentence by breaking up the sentences into shorter ones. If you have questions, you can reply to me through our normal ways or if you want, you can edit this page and start a new line with a colon (:) before you write your reply. Don't forget your signature with four of these (~) in a row! Swim123blue (talk) 19:29, 27 May 2020 (UTC)