User talk:Jillian924/Sandbox

This is heavily derivative of the English Wikipedia page on the topic. That is acceptable but you must appropriately cite the main entry.

If I were totally naive about ABA, after reading the entry, I would not know, for example, that it is widely used with individuals with autism spectrum disorders to reduce or eliminate behaviors or to shape or add desirable behaviors.

The language is not simple enough for simple wikipedia. You should have few (or no) compound sentences, and few embedded phrases. There are multiple formatting issues. Mringaterutgers (talk) 14:11, 17 November 2013 (UTC)