User talk:TomRed
Hello, TomRed, and welcome to the Simple English Wikipedia! I hope you will be happy helping here. You should begin by reading these pages: Wikipedia:Useful, Help:Contents, Wikipedia:Policies and guidelines, and how to write Simple English articles. If you want some ideas of which pages to work on, read Wikipedia:Requested articles or the list of wanted pages.
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Good luck and happy editing! · Tygartl1·talk· 18:25, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
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First of all, sorry for the delay in my response. I've been away for the last few days and did not have a chance to reply to you sooner. I think it is a very good start to the article. The "story" section seems a little long/detailed but that can be trimmed down in time. The level of English you used seems to be fine. I am glad that you did not just copy and paste the article here. You realize that the article must use simpler English and that's very good. I hope you will be happy editing here. · Tygartl1·talk· 18:29, 22 August 2007 (UTC)