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This article badly needs references.

--UnicornTapestry (talk) 08:32, 14 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Firstly, well done on getting this far. Specific points:

"In junior high school, her body began changing. She got her now famous curves. She said it made ballet difficult, but boys liked it." This has questionable encyclopedic value, and is not sourced- it should probably be removed in my opinion.
The sentences in the "modeling" and "cover girl" sections are quite clipped and abrupt, some are not quite grammatically correct either. A little bit of tweaking for smooth reading is due there.
The personal info section (and to some extent, the honours section) reads like an unrelated list of trivia. It is interesting though- is there a way to work it into the prose?

In general, it's in pretty good shape. After these minor issues are resolved, it's definitely ready for mainspace. Great work and keep it up! sonia^♫♪ 11:53, 21 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, sonia! --UnicornTapestry (talk) 07:32, 22 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]