Talk:Adoration of the Magi (Fra Angelico and Filippo Lippi)
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Preliminary view[change source]
Greetings, Feminism and Folklore 2024 contest participant! I will begin this preliminary evaluation by running the text of this article through a readability gizmo. It is giving me readings as young as sixth grade with an average of seventh grade. HUZZAH.
I will now read it with my mighty human brain. Okay... The level of writing and simplification is merely not perfect. It doesn't need to be perfect. There's more passive voice than I'd like. Overall, it works.
The thing I'm on the fence about is the choice of topic and whether it pertains to folklore as we understand it. I must think on this. Darkfrog24 (talk) 00:13, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Links[change source]
While this is technically not an orphan article, it looks like most of the links to this article link to the concept of the adoration of the Magi and not to this specific work of art. For example, the link in Leonardo da Vinci is meant to go to another painting of the same name by Leonardo da Vinci. Darkfrog24 (talk) 01:58, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Not simple[change source]
Well, well below standard for our wiki. Sentences far too long and complex. Macdonald-ross (talk) 13:08, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- But all the same, an important page. Macdonald-ross (talk) 15:34, 11 March 2024 (UTC)