Talk:Airbus A320 family

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Readability[change source]

On its way to VGA, just keeping this link in mind. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:06, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Poor Writing Style[change source]

Was this written by a child?? "cockpit (the front part of the plane where the pilot is)", "replaced by television screens". First of all, we don't need to define what a cockpit is. :) Second, calling the displays that make up a glass cockpit "television screens" is the most ignorant thing I've ever heard! Good lord people, lets clean this up! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.167.252.158 (talk • contribs) 02:41, 6 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

In the very unlikely event you're still watching this, I have begun rewriting the article, so hopefully it will sound a bit better afterwards. -Mh7kJ (talk) 18:25, 14 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]