Talk:Bone

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A ref[change source]

This new visual editor mixes me up. I entered information in a reference, but it showed ti strangely. Then when I try to edit it, it goes all crazy, saying I am trying for some reason to edit an older version, and sometimes showing only one part of the ref, and other times showing more. Here is the source I am trying to enter: Differences among species in microstructure of mammalian skeleton M Martiniakov√° - 2003 - Ph. D. Thesis, Nitra Kdammers (talk) 21:03, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

{moved with osteon to here Macdonald-ross (talk) 21:07, 10 March 2016 (UTC))

Poor lead paragraph[change source]

One section begins with a negative statement (...which is not there to give strength and structure.). This is confusing at best since it is not contrasted with anything immediately preceding it. This sentence should be changed.Kdammers (talk) 19:53, 20 August 2017 (UTC)

Lead looks okay but you're right about the marrow paragraph. Did my rewrite improve it? Jim.henderson (talk) 11:09, 26 August 2017 (UTC)