Talk:Edith Rigby

@Ferien: I'd like to see this article a little simpler before I give it marks. "Committed several acts of arson" could be "illegally set [X] on fire." A lot of the stuff further down could be broken into shorter sentences. Darkfrog24 (talk) 23:23, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

Darkfrog24, ok, I'll try simplifying it further now. --Ferien (talk) 15:49, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

I've simplified it a little, how do you think it's looking now? --Ferien (talk) 18:32, 27 September 2021 (UTC)