Talk:Getafe Cathedral

User:Auntof6, This article is not complex now. but there is a complex template--L.Shriheeran (talk) 10:49, 13 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@L.Shriheeran:, it is still complex. All you did was change the case of one word, and that word is still in the wrong case. There are complex words, compound sentences, and grammatical errors. If you want, I can move this article to your userspace so you can take time to work on it. I am not fixing it myself, because I think people learn better if they do the work themselves. Let me know what you think. --Auntof6 (talk) 05:26, 14 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Auntof6, Can you tell me the complex and compound sentences and then I can simplify them. Please tell me the wrong cases hereǃ...--L.Shriheeran (talk) 10:25, 14 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

OK, let's do this a little at a time. I'll start with a compound sentence. The second sentence (the one that starts with "The church, designed by") is a compound sentence. It has three different ideas in it: who designed the building, when construction started, and when construction ended. Try splitting it into three separate sentences so that each one has only one idea. --Auntof6 (talk) 10:53, 14 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

It looks like User:Rus793 simplified the article. I should have put an in-use tag on it. You might want to look at what Rus did to see what was needed. Let me know if you have any questions about it. If you create any more articles, I suggest you start them in your userspace and get someone to check them for you before creating the regular article. --Auntof6 (talk) 16:58, 14 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

ːAuntof6 Thank youǃ. I'm going to create some other articles. Can you help me how to crate them ǃ...--L.Shriheeran (talk) 10:34, 15 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]