Talk:Striptease
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Latest comment: 1 month ago by Eptalon in topic worst written article?
Are four images really necessary at the end of the article?
One or two, as shown on English Wiki would be enough, four is just for titillation.
Please give your opinions!
Gwib-(talk)- 19:32, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
- I think you're right. It's too many. If they were different pictures, it'd be a different story. But it's just the same girl at 4 different times in her dance. · Tygartl1·talk· 19:45, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for that!
- Gwib-(talk)- 19:49, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for that!
worst written article?
[change source]"The use of calling a person a "stripper" is unofficial and unpropitious in the United States, Mexico, Colombia, and Brazil. " - is this simple english? ~2026-19856-07 (talk) 22:24, 30 March 2026 (UTC)
- you are right, it sounds very badly written. Anyone can change articles, so if you want, try a better wording... Eptalon (talk) 22:34, 30 March 2026 (UTC)
- removed the respective section. Eptalon (talk) 12:05, 31 March 2026 (UTC)
- Article can still be improved, for example by adding sources? Eptalon (talk) 12:56, 31 March 2026 (UTC)
- removed the respective section. Eptalon (talk) 12:05, 31 March 2026 (UTC)