User talk:2407:7000:9D91:8573:2CAC:B875:DBBB:DEB3

Hello, IP editor. Thanks for the articles you have created here.

I noticed that you included wording similar to this:

"After the Fall" is a 1983 song by Journey and is the third single from their 8th studio album Frontiers."

As you might know, on this wiki, simple language is needed. Part of that is using simple sentence structure. The sentence I quoted above is not simple because it includes a dependent clause, and because it is about two different things.

A simpler way to write it would be like this:

"After the Fall" is a 1983 song by Journey. It is the third single from their 8th studio album Frontiers."

Please write these sentences this way when you create articles. If you have any questions about this, feel free to ask. Thanks again! -- Auntof6 (talk) 02:13, 22 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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