User talk:Mundagenta/Sandbox
Copy edit[change source]
I went through the intro and copy edited it to both have it display properly and give you an idea of the general style to try to get the article into. One big suggestion I would give is to not rephrase something someone said and still imply is is a quote. If you change is, it is no longer a quote. It is often best to just explain what they said (rephrasing it) and provide a reference to the actual quote. Which brings me to point two. Many of the references are blank. Each point that people could wonder if it is true should have a reference so people can see for themselves that the facts in the article are trie. The more debatable a fact is, the more references it may need to prove it is correct. Just do not over do it.. It is very rare to need more than 3 references to support a fact. Pure Evil (talk) 09:04, 18 October 2023 (UTC)