Talk:Typhoon Tip

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Please provide the exact version and not a link to the article itself. Griffinofwales (talk) 20:51, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

PGA comments

• designation - not really simple. Link perhaps to simpleWT (I can help with creation).
• injured - perhaps "hurt". I think this is easier.
• 42 deaths, and shipwrecks - the comma looks overdue to me.

  Fixed ಠ_ಠ!i!King OF ZE Ravenz!i!ಠ_ಠ (talk) 16:55, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

• Because Roger was so close - What/Who is Roger?

• Well, the article mentions "Tropical Storm Roger" just a couple sentences before. –Juliancolton | ^Talk 16:59, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

• Typhoon Tip very quickly strengthened - the very is really needed?
• Impact section: also the injured (see above)
• which is very high for a tropical cyclone - The very.

Looks fine to me at all. --Barras (talk) 20:44, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

Hey, thanks for the comments! I've done most of that and left one comment above. –Juliancolton | ^Talk 16:59, 30 November 2009 (UTC)