Talk:Beoncy Laishram
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Do you see what I did?[change source]
I went ahead and simplified the article. I think that means that I cannot give it marks in the contest (but IWI can). But do you see what I did to make it simpler? I broke big sentences down into small ones. I replaced hard words with easy words: [1]
Do you think you could do that on your other entries? Take big sentences with lots of parts and give each part its own sentence? If you can do that in your other contest entries, it would help a lot.
It would help if the references were formatted too. Darkfrog24 (talk) 19:23, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
- Darkfrog24 Thank you so much for the simplification process. However, if such actions of yours will lead you to compel to leave the article from giving points, I have a humble request to you that you please give me only suggestion by pinpointing out the mistakes in either the respective article's talk page or somewhere else (maybe at my talk page). I said this because IWI is very very inactive these days. And if he fails to get active for one more month, then every accepting or declining or giving points (either for accepting or for values of the articles) are all to be done by only you. Because you are the only active jury member in simple English wikipedia. I can't lose you, friend! BTW, I am so much grateful for your help and will always try to corporate with each and every of your instructions from time to time. Haoreima (talk) 20:11, 27 September 2021 (UTC)