Talk:Crevalle jack

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complex words: common, marine, distributed, predatory, consume

instead of saying where they "are found", say where they "live"

link these: species

--Auntof6 (talk) 09:47, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Reorganized the article, left in only the necessary words. Angela Maureen (talk) 12:10, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Pretty good! Still a few complex words. Take care of those. --Auntof6 (talk) 19:58, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Got the complexes taken out. Anything more? Angela Maureen (talk) 21:08, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Good work! Just the word "marine" still needs addressing. --Auntof6 (talk) 22:05, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Word marine was changed. Angela Maureen (talk) 22:35, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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