Talk:Divan-i Shams-i Tabrizi

Still complex

@Tamanpreet Kaur: Please make sure to replace all the complex words and complex sentences present in the articles you have submitted by simple words and simple sentences. Words like encompassing, conception, incorporeal, designation, universalist, repudiate, etc. are considered complex English. And there are lots of uncited passages in the articles you have submitted. It may become one of the reasons for declining your submission. Please make sure to provide citations or remove the uncited info. It's not only for this particular article but for the rest too. If you are still in the state of developing or simplifying these articles, please make sure to submit such only when they're completely simplified & cited. Else, any jury can decline/approve your hard works at any moment during the event. I am not going to leave messages of detected complex words in each articles' talk pages. But please check them. Thanks! :-) --Haoreima (talk) 22:54, 7 February 2024 (UTC)

@Tamanpreet Kaur: 1) Is the F&F template not on this talk page because you do not want to submit this as a contest entry? 2) I concur with contest organizer Haoreima's assessment, and so does my readability gizmo. It's giving me hits for nothing below twelfth grade.[1] My own reading gives similar findings. Given that many of your other contest entries have been deleted as too complex for SEWP, I recommend you move your remaining articles to your userspace and work on them as drafts until you feel they are ready for SEWP's readers. 3) If this is a translation from another wiki, remember to mark it in the page history, using the "translated" template, or both. Translations are allowed, even translations from en.wiki, but they must be in simple English. This is a longstanding policy: WP:TA. Darkfrog24 (talk) 01:14, 20 February 2024 (UTC)